Hey guys hope everybody alright and life a treat unuh well
Happy Easter π
Hope unuh enjoy unuh bun and cheese even though some of us get bun everyday π
(Can’t relate)
To me bun and cheese is a everyday ting deven waah see no bun nor cheese rn but to those eating it eat fi mi and yuh
Let’s get into the problems I have with you guys regarding this book
If for any reason you find or take offense to anything I’m about to say just life…
β’ The characters are whom pictures I used in the chapter titled ‘CHARACTERS’ I won’t tolerate bullying over here especially when it comes on to the people I chose as characters
It’s simple sometimes just read no need to assume everything is clear!
β’ The time frame doesn’t add up and that’s my fault If you knew me from the first ten chapters you’d know that I edited and changed the storyline mid book
There is a lot of mistakes in this book that I’ll fix over time
β’ The no voting thing I get that not everybody wants to comment you know silent readers but you guys can at least vote just tap di star that’s it nothing hard
Unuh can vote eno
||Problems I know you guys have with this book||
1. The grammar
Most times mi know unuh a real and buck up pon things like this
She asks for the bottle out the closet because he was more clise…in sense you’d say it’s close but to others it irritates them
Soon edit mon just gimme time
2. Time frames
Most a eh book tek place inna 7 months you might think maybe it’s like earlier than that but the time frame is within seven months (7)
It will all make sense when it’s edited
3. Alot happened
I know some people are confused due to the fact that alot I didn’t write about especially when he asks mia to be his girlfriend he did I saw comments where people were like “when did she become his girlfriend,?”
He did ask her I just didn’t write about it sense that I wasn’t taking the book seriously until chapter 19 and that’s like 3 chapters before the book ended to show you
4. Punctuation
You guys don’t know when the sentence ends nor when it begins it confuses the readers and I apologize for that
As I said it will be edited soon
If there’s another else I’ve forgotten please let me know in my message or dm me on Instagram
That’s all I had to say
Thank you for taking your time to read this
Love alwaysSign management β€οΈ